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Awakening

April 13, 2008 by bipolarlawyercook

Awakening

The chirps aren’t sharp–
the trills aren’t shrill.
But the waking me, at dawn,
thinks their proudness
and their loudness
makes their tweets
less sweet.

Posted in just plain silly, poems | 5 Comments

5 Responses to “Awakening”

on April 13, 2008 at 7:02 am1 amy

cute.
on April 13, 2008 at 10:03 am2 Cheri

Did you write this? I *heart* Awakening!

I have a fireplace in my bedroom and those effers (um, I mean, God’s lovely creatures) sit on the chimney in the morning and blast me out of bed. Twice a week or so. What’s up with that?
on April 13, 2008 at 10:27 am3 Jenn @ Juggling Life

Amen, sister. I have a tree right outside my bedroom window, and the birds are just so damn happy to be there they can’t shut up about it!
on April 16, 2008 at 12:41 am4 Fiona

I love it!!! I am a huge fan of silly verse and doggerel. And limericks. This one is really good. Made me laugh.
on April 18, 2008 at 4:12 pm5 Melanie at Beanpaste

Perfect. I have to say, the birds around here are still charming. They don’t start pissing me off until July.